Apr 5, 2007

Flash Pan Piazza - I

4 comments:

daemon said...

Almost perfect by my standards. Very good one. Could instantly feel the tension.

Ramanand said...

Thank you, kind sir. This and another one I'm about to post were sent in for a writing contest. They didn't progress too far though :-(

Harish Kumar said...

That was a good one. I was mentally making a short film based on this - would be perfect.

daemon said...

Hmm.. may be because it might not seem very novel. The idea has been there. But your execution was really good.