Apr 5, 2007

Flash Pan Piazza - I

4 comments:

daemon said...

Almost perfect by my standards. Very good one. Could instantly feel the tension.

J Ramanand said...

Thank you, kind sir. This and another one I'm about to post were sent in for a writing contest. They didn't progress too far though :-(

Harish Kumar said...

That was a good one. I was mentally making a short film based on this - would be perfect.

daemon said...

Hmm.. may be because it might not seem very novel. The idea has been there. But your execution was really good.