The Caferati-LiveJournal Quick Tales contest results came in on the 18th (
the announcement here).
This story of mine was placed 4th.
As it turns out, this story and three others tied for the top spot. The tie-breaker left me in the last spot (apply clichés about cookie crumbling'/'biscuit breaking'/'shrewsbury slicing' :-)).
Congratulations to all the winners (quite a few of them). Pats on back to organisers for seeing this through, and for making judging comments available.
One judge mentioned some trouble interpreting the 2nd last sentence, which I didn't realise at the time of writing (I meant one wife and two girlfriends only, present company included. The implication of who hired the man was intentionally open-ended, but in my mind, it was the wife.). I wish I had had another 50-100 words, because I had to skip past a few binding agents to fit it in.